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Lesson 1 |
Focusing Your
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LESSON 3: Writing "Familiar" Lyrics
BE FAMILIAR
A familiar lyric
is one in which the songwriter has succeeded in pulling the listener
into an imaginary world that feels completely real. The singer feels
that the song is describing a situation that they've either encountered
before, or could easily encounter in their future. Being familiar is
being real.
Familiar text means that you try to word things using common every day
language. In most languages, there is a "written way" of communicating,
and an "oral way." And the way we write things is not necessarily the
way we say things. Written text can sometimes have a formality that
oral text doesn't have or need.
When you write lyrics, you may want to write them like they are poetry,
and this can be good especially if you, as the writer, wish to maintain
a certain emotional distance from the listener. But if you really want
to snag the listener, and make them feel that the song could also be
about them, you'll want to use more familiar, informal, emotion-driven
text.
Compare these examples of formal, sometimes stiff, text versus
informal, familiar text:
1. FORMAL: When I arise...
INFORMAL: When I wake up in the
morning...
2. FORMAL: My heart sings for your heart...
INFORMAL: I love you!
3. FORMAL: It hurts me to know...
INFORMAL: It tears me up...
4. FORMAL: It amused me...
INFORMAL: I laughed...
5. FORMAL: I hope that you understand...
INFORMAL: I need you to see...
Keep in mind that all the examples of so-called formal text are
actually possible lines from songs that can work very well. But if you
want to get to the grass-roots listener, opt for the informal rather
than the formal.
TELL THE WHOLE STORY, NOT JUST THE EFFECT
If all you do is
constantly tell your listener how you're feeling about something,
you're going to leave the listener feeling empty. It's not enough
to write songs about your emotions. You need to tell them a
story, something that they can relate to. In very important ways, the
listener needs to feel that your story is their story.
Do lyrics need to rhyme? Not always, but often. Rhyming is part of
infusing a sense of form into the song. Form is vital. Form is what
demonstrates a beginning, middle and end to your song. You can read
more about lyrics and form in "The
Essential Secrets of Songwriting."
ACTIVITIES for
WRITING "FAMILIAR" LYRICS
1. Take the following "formal" text
fragments, and write them in a more familiar way. NOTE: They don't have
to rhyme... You're just looking for ways to loosen up some rather stiff
language. Feel free to take what you're given below and write two or
three lines if necessary.
EXAMPLE:
1. FORMAL: I hope that you understand...
INFORMAL: I need you to see...
i) I'm going through a difficult time: ____________________________
ii) I got on the bus: ___________________________________
iii) You and I get along so well: _______________________________
iv) My troubled mind kept me from sleeping: _____________________
v) The task is complete: _______________________________
vi) The turmoil was distracting: ______________________________
vii) Trust in me: ______________________________
viii) Alcohol is not the answer: _______________________________
ix) I miss the good times: ___________________________________
x) I'm exhausted: ______________________________
2. Write four-line lyrics that gets the following ideas across:
i) I'm trying to do my work, but I am distracted by the things you said
to me last evening. Frankly, it's taking up all my time trying to sort
out the issues in my life.
______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
ii) I know you are feeling depressed, but you need to focus on the fact
that better days are coming.
______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
iii) I want to be a successful business person, and I know that that
means I may have to abandon the things in my life that I love.
______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
iv) Who cares if I've got lots of work to do - I want to just sit back
and daydream about the nice times we've had together.
______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
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