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Giving Your Songs A Noticeable Point of Focus

When you look at paintings, you’ll notice that most of them have a noticeable point of focus — the area of the canvas that your eye gets drawn toward. Music is not much different; in most songs, you’ll notice that there’s a point of focus. The only difference is that in songs, you usually have to wait to hear that point, while paintings offer it to you right away.

And in fact, both music and art will offer several points for the audience to focus on: a main one, but other subordinate spots that offer their own level of interest.

Pierre Bonnard, Dining Room in the Country

Pierre Bonnard, Dining Room in the Country

I’m not an artist, and so I won’t try to tell you much about Bonnard’s techniques or motivations. I can tell you that the painting above is of his dining room table in Verronet, France. That’s his wife looking in at the scene. He apparently painted the scene from memory.


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But on the topic of point of focus, I think you’ll agree that as you look from one side of the canvas to the other, you’ll find your eye drawn to several different objects. The table is obviously noticeable and imposing. The cat in the chair is interested in the food on the table. The garden is beautiful, and I find that the land behind has a way of pulling my attention away from the scene at the house. Orange seems to be the overpowering colour, but I find that that makes me look for the non-orange things.

And you can have an interesting discussion with someone about what (or who) Bonnard intended to be the point of focus. Maybe the lesson here is that life doesn’t always give us one main point of focus: perhaps our brains fuse all points together.

In music, we often talk about a point of focus, and we’re often talking about melodies when we do. The point of focus is often the highest point, and I have written many times about the climactic high point we find in most good song melodies.

Without some focal point, we find that our brains automatically search for one. Or it gives up.

In pop music, a musical journey lasts 3 to 4 minutes. And in that journey, we typically need to hear something that jumps out at us, something that says, “this is what this song is all about.”

Do your songs have an important point of focus? It doesn’t need to be in the melody, though that’s an important one. And like a good painting, a good song will often have several points where we say, “Ahhh… that’s what I’ve been waiting to hear!”

In addition to melodies with high points, you’ll want to think about:

  1. Lyrics with a good pay-off line. A pay-off line is one where the point or purpose of the lyric is displayed front and centre. Good pay-off lines are often clever or imaginative, will happen either at the beginning or end of a chorus, and will often be the song’s title. (“I Walk the Line” – Johnny Cash)
  2. Chord progressions with an interesting moment or diversion. Most verses and choruses will use the same progression for each section, so the only truly unique progression might be in the optional bridge section. Bridges allow you to take your song in a  new, interesting direction, and it’s a great spot for something powerful to happen. Be sure that you’re allowing your bridge to explore a new (even if related) key area. That will give your chords that all-important point of focus.
  3. Finding a moment for an interesting instrumental treatment. That moment might be a section where all instruments stop except for one (like the bass solo in Paul Simon’s “You Can Call Me Al”)

In a song with several interesting moments, one will usually stand out as being most significant, but as the songwriter, it’s not so crucial for you to decide which moment is most important. All that really matters is that you’ve given your listeners something to focus on and remember.


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Songwriting: Moving Beyond Random Excellence

What role does chance play in the writing of a good song? Since good songwriting is guided by principles and not rules, there’s undoubtedly going to be a certain amount of random good luck. On that particular day, at that particular moment, your imagination created that melodic idea. There’s no way to get around it: good songwriting involves randomness.


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But as I’ve mentioned in the past, even bad golfers can make a hole in one, and look amazing doing it. Everything they’ve done up to that point may have been mediocre, and everything after it as well. But for that one shot, they can look like a golfing genius.

Writing a great song can be a bit like that. Because randomness plays a role in what our creative brains generate, it’s possible to be a mediocre songwriter and then write something great. The stars can align; it can happen.

But you need to go beyond randomness. Whether you’re singing your songs in a café to friends and family, or trying to get the attention of the big players in the music industry, you need to be able to write excellently and with consistency.

In the creative arts, what can you do to increase your chances of writing great songs? In fact, how do you go beyond chance, and become a consistently excellent writer? Some ideas:

  1. Isolate and work on your weaknesses. If lyrics are hard for you, dedicate songwriting sessions to honing your abilities. Read good lyrics, and do lyric-writing exercises, like these ones. If it’s melodies, try to describe to yourself what you think the problem is. Not enough contour? Not working well with the chords? Try these exercises.
  2. Make songwriting a daily scheduled activity. If you leave songwriting to be something that happens when you find yourself with a bit of time, you need to add discipline to the mix. That discipline comes from dedicating parts of every day to writing. Create a schedule, put it down on paper or get it into your phone. Here are some tips for creating a daily schedule.
  3. Spend lots of time improvising. Whether with loops set up on a keyboard, or with bandmates, improvising helps you create and then polish musical ideas.
  4. Perform your songs as much as possible. How great a song is comes down to what an audience is wanting to hear. You learn so much by hearing their reaction.
  5. Favour originality over reworking old successes. When a song works well, your temptation is to keep writing the same sort of thing over and over again. Before you know it, you’re losing your fanbase, who think they’ve heard everything they’re ever going to get from you. So keep changing your songwriting process, choose new keys, new tempos, topics… anything to keep your new songs sounding original and fresh.

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When All Your Songs Seem To Be In the Same Key

Because most songwriters are also instrumentalists, muscle memory plays a big role in key choice. If you’re a guitarist and you’re noodling around trying to create some ideas for songs, you’ll find your fingers wanting to move to the notes and patterns that you find the easiest to play.


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If you don’t do anything to address it, this kind of muscle memory can cause the following problems for instrumentalist/songwriters:

  1. You tend to favour the same keys.
  2. All your musical ideas wind up in a similar tempo.
  3. You notice that most of your songs use the same backing rhythm patterns.

Once you’ve set up a rhythmic treatment in a particular tempo, using your favourite key, your new song is going to sound very similar to the last one you wrote. But there are things you can do to ensure that muscle memory on your instrument doesn’t mean all your songs will sound the same.

Here are some ways to make sure that each song you write sounds fresh and original.

  1. Work out a chord progression in your favourite key if you must, but immediately transpose to a higher or lower key. You can use the overall energy level of your song idea as a guide in this regard. For more energetic songs, move the key up. For more laid back, gentle songs, move it down.
  2. Switch modes. If your songs all tend to be in E major, transposing to the so-called parallel minor key of E minor will give your song a dramatically different feel. Example: Play this progression: E  A  F#m  B  E. Now try this: Em  Am  F#dim  B  Em. That small change from major to minor makes all the difference.
  3. Try setting up a tempo and feel as a starting point. Start by tapping your foot, and make sure that you’re setting a different tempo than your last song. With this new tempo in mind, apply your favourite process: set up a 2- or 3-chord vamp, or improvise a melodic shape.
  4. Create songwriting ideas on an unfamiliar instrument. You may not be a good mandolin player, but you don’t need to be if all you’re doing is coming up with songwriting ideas. The different tuning, and even the different sound of the instrument, will guide your musical mind in a new direction. You’ll find that melodies you improvise on a new instrument will sound quite different from what you’re normally used to.
  5. Become a better instrumentalist. One reason your fingers always move to the same notes and shapes is that you’re not familiar with other key possibilities on your instrument. Develop your playing abilities, either by taking lessons, or by intentionally transposing familiar music to new keys. Take a favourite song that you like playing, and see how many different keys you can move it to. It will take time and a lot of practice, but it’s one of the best ways to combat muscle memory.
  6. Try alternate tunings. If you’re a keyboardist, you’re likely stuck with what the keyboard gives you. But as a guitarist, you can try new unique tunings, ones that will give your song an entirely new sound. The possibilities are endless. Here’s an article to give you some specific ideas to try.

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The Role of Cleverness in Popular Songwriting

When we use the word “clever” in songwriting, we’re usually talking about lyrics. In that context, a clever lyric means any one of the following:

  1. There’s a double meaning going on that might not be immediately obvious. (i.e., the song isn’t about what it appears to be about)
  2. There are common words being used in an uncommon or unexpected way. (i.e., “I’m high but I’m grounded…” (Alanis Morissette, “Hand In My Pocket”)
  3. The lyric makes copious use of metaphors, alliteration, similes and other poetic devices.

Could we ever consider a melody to be clever? How about a chord progression? Would you ever hear a rhythm in the backing instruments and think, “That sounds clever?”


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We might be tempted to equate the word clever with “complex” or “intricate,” but I think that would be a mistake. Being clever has a bit of surprise attached to its meaning: you used a word, a phrase, or perhaps an entire lyric, in a way that was unexpected.

Cleverness is hard to incorporate into pop songs, because one of the most important features of pop music is the immediacy of appeal. The most successful hit songs are ones that people tend to “get” — to understand — pretty much right away.

True, there may be new aspects of the lyric that are revealed as we hear them many times. There might be phrases that we never truly understand. But those don’t typically keep us from enjoying the song right away.

If you’re ready to bump your lyric-writing abilities up to the level of being clever, then, you need to keep a few things in mind:

  1. Pop songs generally need to be immediately appealing, no matter how clever the lyric might be. We often think of songs for which we have an instant liking to be “dumbed down” for commercial appeal, but that’s not necessarily true. A song’s groove and feel can give it an immediate appeal, and buys you some time if you’ve opted to write a lyric that’s clever, deeper, or more intricate in some way.
  2. Clever lyrics can move dangerously close to being pretentious. A pretentious lyric means that you’re using complex words or phrasing for no good reason, simply to sound intellectually superior, and it’s artistically dishonest. Read though any lyric that you consider to be clever, and you’ll find that the best ones use common, everyday words, but assembled sometimes in unexpected ways.
  3. Remember your genre, and remember your audience. Some song lyrics just don’t need to be overly shrewd. I’ve always loved the line from “Boys ‘Round Here” (Rhett Akins, Dallas Davidson, Craig Wiseman) that goes, “The boys ’round here don’t listen to the Beatles…” It’s a fun line, quite an unexpected way to start a song, and almost argumentative in a “twinkle-in-the-eye” kind of way. To me, it’s clever, and I might add, clever enough.
  4. Partnership between song elements is more important than cleverness. When it comes right down to it, a song in which all the elements — the lyrics, melodies, chords, instrumentation, etc. — work well together will outperform any other song that’s simply clever. Clever is an attribute of a song element, not an element itself.

I believe that cleverness in music comes over time. It’s not something we can consciously do, any more than we can be consciously “smarter”, “cooler”, or “funnier.” If you want to bump your lyric-writing to a new level, you need to read lots of good lyrics, and spend a lot of time writing and rewriting your lyrical attempts.


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A Simple Way to Create Minor-Sounding Verses

It’s a common characteristic of many songs in the pop genres: a minor-sounding verse that moves to a major-sounding chorus. You might think that means you need to create two completely different progressions.

But let’s say that you’ve worked out a good chorus hook, and now you’re trying to create a verse that partners well with it. Here’s a quick and easy trick to take a chorus progression and turn it into something that works nicely in the verse, and prepares the arrival of the chorus hook.


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First, write out your chorus progression. The progression below is shown in C major. You can hold each chord as long as you want, but let’s assume you’ll change chords every two beats (i.e., two chords per bar):

I  bVII  ii  V  (C  Bb  Dm  G) (Click below to listen)

Next, place a vi-chord at the beginning of the progression, and then follow it up with the chorus progression:

vi  I  bVII  ii  V  (Am  C  Bb  Dm  G) (Click below to listen)

To make the verse progression the same length as your chorus progression (four chords), simply remove one of the chords from the chorus progression. I’ve opted to remove the final G:

vi  I  bVII  ii  (Am  C  Bb  Dm) (Click below to listen)

Creating a verse progression in this way has an important advantage: it uses the chords from the chorus progression, but because the I-chord, which was on beat 1 of the first bar, is now on the second half of the bar, it sounds similar but different.

The similarity makes it an idea partner. The fact that it now starts with a minor chord makes it an ideal verse progression.

There are a few ideas you can try to modify what I’ve suggested above:

  1. Start your verse on a different minor chord: ii or iii.
  2. Remove a different chord to make it the same length as the chorus progression. I opted to remove the final V-chord, but you should experiment with other possibilities.
  3. Use the chorus progression idea as a start for your verse, and then create an entirely original second half to a verse progression.

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