The Structure of Good Verse Melodies

It’s hard to think about song melodies without also thinking about the chords that we put underneath them. They go hand in hand. Historically (as in hundreds of years ago) music was all about the melody. Eventually (in the early 1600s) it was melody and bass line, with chords starting to fill in the middle.

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I wonder if that’s why I like melody-first songwriting processes. You can make a melody sound even better by the kinds of chords you choose. Chords-first processes can work, of course, but leaving the melody until after you’ve chosen chords means that you’re putting the thing that people hum and remember behind chords in importance. That’s trickier, though it can work.

Verse melodies can be challenging when comparing them to chorus melodies, for two important reasons:

  1. A verse melody usually wanders around more than a chorus melody. That’s because the chorus melody is typically hook-like, which means that it’s comprised of short melodic ideas that are repetitious. (Think “Born In the U.S.A.” as an example).
  2. The chords supporting a verse melody are often more tonally ambiguous than the chords supporting a chorus melody. Chorus chords are usually simpler, and focus more on the tonic chord than what we often find with a verse.

You can certainly have verse hooks, and some songs are really a hierarchy of various hooks where the verse hook isn’t as catchy or noticeable as the chorus hook (perhaps Michael Jackson’s “Bad” is a good example of this notion). But the main feature of a verse melody is not so much the hook, but how the ups and downs of the melody pair up nicely with the lyric.

The biggest challenge of writing a verse melody is writing something that captivates a listener enough to keep them listening, but still allows the eventual chorus hook to take centre stage.

With that in mind, here are some tips to consider as you practice writing verse melodies:

  1. Start your verse melody low in your vocal range. This gives you room to move higher when the chorus appears, and that’s a standard and important feature of most songs.
  2. Look for ways to stray from typical I-IV-V progressions as support for your verse melody. In a verse progression, it’s nice to either start on a non-tonic chord (like the vi-chord, or the ii-chord as we hear in “All My Loving” (Lennon & McCartney).
  3. Remember that repetition is an important part of verse melody structure. Though we tend to think of a chorus hook as a short, repeating figure, the verse also uses repetition, both exact and approximate. Listen for exact and approximate repetition of ideas in the verse of Adele’s “Rolling In the Deep” to get an idea of how important repetition can be to pulling in a listener and keep them listening.
  4. Verse melodies can work as chorus melodies. But because of the importance of a song’s chorus to the overall memorability and enjoyment of a song, it’s more a case where chorus melodies can work as verse melodies. If you’re using the same melody for both sections, get a good chorus happening first, and then make the production more transparent for your verse.
  5. Allow your verse melody to be more rhythmically interesting and intricate than the rhythms of your chorus melody. “Rolling In the Deep” is a good example of this feature as well. There are many quick syncopations and quicker rhythms in the verse when compared to the chorus. The chorus rhythms then simplify and lock into the hook, and that contrast is usually an important part of making the chorus shine.

The most important part of a verse is that it makes listeners seek out the chorus. Verse melodies start to move higher, and, along with clever production ideas, builds musical excitement. If your chorus melody sounds anticlimactic or otherwise uninteresting, it’s time to look back at the verse melody to see if it’s properly preparing the listener for that chorus.

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Fixing Songwriting Errors Before Recording

If you ever listen to an old 1950s-era recording of jazz pianist Oscar Peterson, you’re probably hearing him with his trio which included Herb Ellis on guitar and Ray Brown on bass. No drummer at that time, but the three of them played with such a powerful sense of beat and rhythm that you don’t miss the drummer at all.

And if you want to hear what I mean, listen to their recording of “Swinging Till the Girls Come Home” (written by Oscar Pettiford). No drummer, but you’d swear there was.

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There are some groups, on the other hand, where you feel that if it weren’t for the drummer, the band’s sense of rhythm would be weaker. The drummer works to hold things together, and that’s not a good thing. The best use of a drummer is to add to the sound and feel of a song, not to repair errors.

I’m mentioning this because there is a similar situation that occurs in the songwriting world, where musical weaknesses within a song require fixing, and where those weaknesses are repaired by the producer during the production of the recording.

A Good Producer

A good producer is often dealing with things that songwriters can’t necessarily deal with at the songwriting stage, and it’s an important part of their job.

For example, it’s an important principle that songs maintain or gain musical energy as they progress. That’s one that a producer can easily deal with, and it usually means manipulating instrumental sounds and volume.

But here’s an issue (a principle, actually) that songwriters can deal with: a verse melody typically wanders low in the singer’s range, and then it moves upward to include higher notes, particularly as it gets ready to join to the chorus.

If a songwriter doesn’t know that that principle is important — the upward-moving melody — it can be dealt with at the production stage, and usually means that a producer tries to build musical energy, again by manipulating aspects of the music during recording and/or mixing.

But — and this is why I’m bringing this up — songwriting issues are best dealt with at the songwriting stage, not the production stage. Good production helps support those aspects of music, doesn’t try to create them in their absence.

How do you know you’ve got a song that is the best it can be? Try making a recording of it as an unaccompanied, solo voice song.

If you like how the melodies work, then record it again, adding in a simple chord progression using guitars and/or keyboards. Does it still work? Do you like what you hear? Do the rhythms, chords, melodies and lyrics all support the general intent of the song? Those song elements are the most important part of what makes a song really work, from a structural point of view.

If you can still say yes to all that, then you’ve got a song that’s ready for everything else that typically goes with producing music in your chosen genre.

There’s nothing quite so important as getting a song to work well at this bare-bones level. Once it works, everything you add to it works to support those great song elements.

In a way, production can be like the drummer in a band: it can fix errors, but its best use is to support songs and make them better, not repair them.

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The True Nature of Contrast in Songwriting

We tend to over-simplify what we mean by contrast in a good song, and thereby misunderstand its power.

Contrast, in musical terms, means considering musical opposites: loud versus soft, high versus low, and so on.

When we over-simplify contrast, we simply think that the contrast principle requires us to mix loud and soft sounds, high and low melodies, major and minor chords… that sort of thing.

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But that’s not what the contrast principle is all about. If it were, we’d have no good way to describe why some songs are great even though they use melodies that all sit mainly within the same small melodic range, like “Hound Dog” (Jerry Leiber/ Mike Stoller), or songs that don’t feature much of a change at all in volume, like Joni Mitchell’s “Coyote” from her 1976 album “Hejira.”

But it is true that we like contrast within a song, so what is the true nature of contrast in songwriting?

The Contrast Principle

If you ask a psychologist what is meant by the contrast principle, they’ll say something like: if you put your hand in a bucket of cold water, and then put it in a bucket of warm water, the warm water will feel even warmer than it really is, because you’re conditioned by the first experience: your hand in the cold water.

If you lift a very heavy weight, then put it down and lift a very light one, the lighter weight feels even lighter than you’d normally expect it to feel, because you’re conditioned by the first experience: the feel of the heavy weight.

We experience this contrast principle in less tangible ways, and this is where music comes in. We listen to the start of a song, and based on those initial impressions, will hear other things in the song in comparison to the first things. And we like noting the existence of musical contrast, even if (and some might say especially if) it’s subtle.

So contrast does not need to be obvious or flamboyant. In order to fulfil the requirements of the contrast principle in music, a touch of contrast can go a long way, as in these examples, some of which are strictly songwriting issues, others being production issues:

  1. Contrasting major with minor. While it’s a common technique to contrast a minor verse with a major chorus, many or most songs will keep the verse and chorus in the same key. The contrast principle might take the form of something far more subtle: starting a verse progression with a minor chord, but staying mainly in a major key. Play through these two progressions, and note how bright the first progression sounds, even though the only difference between the two is the opening chord:
    1) C  F  Dm  G  C  ||  2) Am  F  Dm  G  C
  2. Contrasting soft and loud. We usually think of choruses of songs as being louder than verses, and while this is true, the actual difference may only be slight. That’s because the contrast principle says that if the verse is soft, any increase in volume for the chorus, however slight, will be perceived to be greater by virtue of the existence of that soft verse. Listen to Imogen Heap’s “Half Life.” Listen how the changes in instrumentation/production, and the accompanying volume changes, sound far more obvious and ear-catching than the decibels warrant.
  3. Contrasting full and sparse instrumentation and/or production. When a song starts with a very quiet and transparent instrumentation, any change, however slight, to that instrumentation makes much more of an impact than what you’d normally expect. Listen to the gradual build of instrumentation in Peter Gabriel’s “Solsbury Hill” to see what I mean.
  4. Contrasting low with high melodies. Every song has its basic range, but we usually note that the highest notes won’t be at the very beginning; they’ll be in the chorus or bridge. But there’s no need for a song’s highest note to be much higher at all than the highest notes of other sections. Even just a semitone can sound dramatic if it’s placed on a strong beat, or paired with a powerful chord or instrumental moment. Also, a chorus may sound a lot higher than a verse, even though its highest notes may only be a tone or so above the verse.

There are lots of other examples but what’s really important to remember is this: in music, the contrast principle is not simply an acknowledgement that opposites should occur. It’s more subtle than that. We take a strong musical message from the first notes we hear in a song, and then everything else is compared.

And in making those comparisons, we notice that even slight differences are all that’s really needed to make a song musically meaningful.

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Finding Songwriting Inspiration That Can Keep You Going

Inspiration in its most basic terms is excitement. It’s that simple. If you’re inspired, you’re excited.

In the minds of most creators of music or other art forms, inspiration seems crucial. If you’re not inspired, you’re likely not writing.

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Except… many do write even when they don’t feel particularly inspired to do so. It is actually possible to be creative without feeling overly excited or inspired. Film score composers, for example, usually work to very tight schedules. How do they do it if they wake up “not feeling it?”

If you broaden your own personal definition of what inspiration means to you, you should be able to find the inner drive that can keep you writing daily.

Inspiration From Without

If you go through bouts of feeling uninspired, it probably means that you think of inspiration as something that comes from without. You get inspired when you see waterfalls, butterflies, or read an inspiring story of people overcoming adversities in their lives.

The problem with that kind of inspiration is that it is fleeting. We can only sustain that kind of excitement for very brief periods of time (hours, or a day or two) before we feel uninspired once again, and uninclined to write.

Inspiration from Within

The better kind of inspiration is the kind we generate within our own creative minds, where you actually create your own inspiration. The best source of inspiration is often your own success.

There are two main ways to create this kind of inspiration. First, listen to good songs you’ve already written, and remind yourself that you really can do this!

And second, write songs even if you don’t feel like it. Even without inspiration, the human mind is capable of creating musical ideas. As you build on those initial ideas, you’ll find that you get a small shot of excitement as you hear things come together.

The more you add to your initial ideas, the more inspiration your mind creates, and, like the proverbial perpetual motion machine, it keeps you going.

Songwriters are often surprised by this when they try it. And if you haven’t tried it, try it now, even if you feel completely uninspired: Grab your guitar or whichever instrument you use to write, and create a short chord progression or sing a melodic idea with whatever lyric pops into your mind.

Then, since repetition of ideas is so important in good songwriting, try repeating that idea. Maybe repeat it exactly, or try an approximate repeat (like the first couple of lines of “Big Yellow Taxi”, as an example).

Each time you add to your idea, you should feel a shot of excitement. That’s your inspiration to keep going.

As you find that ideas aren’t easily forthcoming, put the song away. Don’t let frustration grab hold. Try listening to good music, then take the song out again and try some more.

In my own writing, I’ve often found that the times I write seemingly without inspiration are the times that I write my best music. I feel inspiration being generated as I write, and to me, that’s far more valuable than inspiration that comes from without.

I wonder if you’ll find the same to be true.

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Joe Cocker

Giving Your Songs More Edge

One of the first things a listener picks up from a song is the mood. Right away, we can usually tell if it’s upbeat and cheerful, or dark and brooding, or somewhere in between. The fact that we notice mood so quickly is probably an indication of how important it is to people.

Online songwriting forums (Reddit and so forth) are great ways to find out what people are dealing with when they write songs. Occasionally you’ll find songwriters dealing with this issue of mood, and more often than not, the problem is that they find their songs to be too light and fluffy, and wish they could come up with something with a bit more edge.

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If this is something you’re dealing with, where everything you write sounds like it could be a soundtrack for a Sunday picnic, here are some suggestions:

  1. Switch major key songs to minor key. Most of the time, this is an easy fix. If your song is in C major, and the chorus progression is something like C-F-Am-G-C, you can switch those with the equivalent chords from C minor: Cm-Fm-Ab-G-(or Gm)-C.
  2. Use lowered VII-chords in place of V-chords. If your progression is C-F-Am-G-C, try switching the G chord to a flat-VII: Bb. That gives you C-F-Am-Bb-C.
  3. Use lowered III-chords as a passing chord between I and IV. Let’s say you take that sample progression (C-F-Am-G-C), where you strum each chord for 2 beats. You might try strumming the first C for 1 beat, follow it immediately with a Flat-III chord: Eb. That helps to take the sweetness away from the progression, and move it toward something with a bit more edge.
  4. Use melodies that have sections that dwell mostly on one note. This is one to experiment with. You hear the effect of this dwelling on one pitch in first part of the verse in Bob Dylan’s “Like a Rolling Stone.” You also get a version of this in Neil Young’s “Southern Man”, where the melody keeps coming back to those opening vocal line pitches.
  5. Think about your lyric choices. Sweet lyrics can be the reason a song sounds so mushy. Freddie Mercury mentioned once in an interview that they were worried about the lyrics to “Your My Best Friend,” as they sounded a bit over the top in the sweetness category. But in that case, they actually work. But just to put it out there: sweet lyrics may need to be darkened a bit, and can be a contributor to a song sounding too warm and fuzzy.
  6. Think about instrumentation, production and vocal quality. Edgy instrumental sounds (distorted guitar and other such effects) can help to dampen the cheery mood of your music. Think about “Helter Skelter” (Lennon & McCartney) and what the guitar sound does for that song.
  7. Experiment with key. This partners up with point #6 above. Lowering key might encourage darker tones from your voice, but there’s also the consideration that raising the key puts your voice closer to the upper part of your range. That allows some natural strain to come through, and might be what your song needs. For example, give Joe Cocker’s version of “You Are So Beautiful” (Billy Preston, Bruce Fisher) a listen, and try to imagine it in any other key. It seems to be purposely chosen to allow the full range of emotions to shine through, including the upper-register screams.

And don’t forget that the basic beat – the groove – of your song will give away its mood almost right away. So experimenting with different ways to present the song, including playing around with tempo, can be a vital part of darkening the mood of a song.

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